Blocked on Facebook
Spotted: 9/26/2016
Creator: Tight Ministry/More Truth
Whoever created this one almost got it right. The apostrophes are all in the right place. The statement is entirely grammatical, and there’s even a period at the end of the sentence! But there are two glaring errors.
First of all, it’s FACEBOOK and not FACE BOOK. That’s the obvious one. Second of all, the comma after INDICATION doesn’t make any sense. Sure, there are rules about commas, and I could cite a few here. But just read it out loud, pausing at the comma, and you’ll see that it doesn’t feel right.
I moved the comma to the appropriate spot and added another one after FACEBOOK. You’re welcome. Here’s the version you should share:
